MY FIRST VAMPIRE LOVE STORY
 
Hi guys! I'm new here and I just started writing my story. I would be so grateful if you guys would check it out Please be nice... And if you have any tips let me know. Also I am in need of an editor, English isn't my first language so if anyone is willing let me know. BTW it's a shared account
 
============================================================= "Please stop crying." I look up to find where that enchanting voice came from that calmed my nerves and sent waves of pleasure up and down my body. I gasp as I lock eyes with the most stunning pair of sapphire eyes. Those stunning pair of sapphire eyes belonged to the most dazzling person I've ever seen. He was breathtaking. His coal black hair simmered in the sun light. Perfect eyebrows, long thick eyelashes, high cheek bones, smooth porcelain white skin, and his lips that were desperately calling out to be kissed by me. I take my eyes away from his lips, to go back to his eyes. I then become aware that he too had been looking me up and down. His eyes were on my lips.
 
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Name:Dustin Drew Callings

Gender: Male

Age: Looks 17 but is really 127

Birthday: 1869

Family: His family is all dead and he doesn't know who changed him

Creature: (Whatever type of mythical creatures you want or human) Vampire

Sexual orientation: Straight

Bio: (make it good 5 or more sentences) Dustin doesn't remember anything of his life before he was turned. All he knows is that he came from a low class family from Romania. All his family was dead and he was about to die had he not been turned. He woke up in the hospital all alone. He didn't know what he was until a week after being turned he was walking down the streets and bumped into the girl, only girl he remembers from his past. The girl he was madly in love with. They went back to her house and when she was cutting bread she cut herself and he went blood crazy killing her and almost everyone in his village. He woke in the woods covered in blood. When he found out he had till the love of his life he went mad and lost his humanity. Since then he's been blood crazy killing people as he please and not giving a damn about anyone. He came here for blood and sex. Also to use the library that has the records of all the creatures that have existed, to find his maker.

Secret (optional): Has been looking for who created him to kill the person. Hates himself for what he his. Knows the number of people he has killed

Other (optional): By looking into peoples eyes he can control their mind and erase it

Bad or good side: [Optional] Bad and likes being bad

Personality: [3 traits] Cocky, arrogant, and charming
 
Crush:[optional] No one he can't love
 
Model: Zac Efron

Name: Valerie Cienciana Lilith
 
Gender: Female
 
Age: 16
 
Birthday: Aug 14 1996
 
Family: Adopted, her family is very rich. Her mom is a famous writer and her dad is a famous doctor. They're always busy and never pay attention to her. They only wanted her so that they could look like the perfect family.
 
Creature (if any): Succubus
 
Sexual orientation: Bi
 
Bio (make it good): Valerie doesn't really know what she is. She just knows that she's different..... deadly different. When Valeire truned 13 her powers came in. She was scared and didn't know what was happening to her. Valerie learned at age 13 that by touching people she can make them do whatever she wants. By 14 she had her first boyfriend. The first time Valerie kissed him she almost killed him. She found out that if she kisses anyone in the mouth she sucks the energy out them. She has no control of it right now, she can't stop once she starts. At 15 a boy tried to kiss her, she scratched his face, drawing blood. After that the boy became so obsessed whit Valerie that he tried to rap.e her. She killed the boy by taken his energy. Her parents covered it up and sent her here. Valerie use to be a fun and out going person that loved to have a good time and make friends but now she's too scared to touch anyone.
 
Secret (optional): She plays the violin and thinks about sex all the time
 
Other (optional): She wants to find out who her real parents are.
 
Bad or good side: She wants to be good but is bad at heart

Personality: Shy, sweet, and sexy without knowing it
 
Crush: doesn't want to like anyone cause shes sacred
 
Model: Selena Gomez

Pick one dorm that isn't taken and find someone to be roommates with and make a set with both rooms
 
http://www.polyvore.com/monster_high_borading_school_roleplay/group.show?id=152310

Pick one dorm that isn't taken and find someone to be roommates with and make a set with both rooms
 
http://www.polyvore.com/monster_high_borading_school_roleplay/group.show?id=152310

school grounds in and out
 
http://www.polyvore.com/monster_high_borading_school_roleplay/group.show?id=152310

roleplay game about monsters that are in a boarding school. http://www.polyvore.com/monster_high_borading_school_roleplay/group.show?id=152310
If anyone is interested please join :) I'm hoping to get it running as soon as possible! Tag as many people as you can<3 thank you and sorry for bothering you guys

+ name: Dustin Ian Lenworth
+ age: 22
+ married to:
+ how long have you been in the army?: Since he was 18
+ how do you feel about leaving your family?: He hates that he has to leave his family but he knows that what he's doing is protect his family.
+ bio/character study: Dustin was born into a middle class old fashion family. His family is all about serving their country. All the men have been in war and now it's Dustin's turn. He's always been use to having to work hard to get what he wants. His dad was very hard on him. He wanted his son to be the best. Which is why they don't get along very well now. Dustin wanted to be a doctor but he couldn't because his father told him if he didn't inlist in the army he was dead to his family. In school he was an A student and very popular. He's a kind and good guy. He always liked helping people which was why he wanted to become a doctor.
 
When Dustin was 5 we meant the girl of his dreams. It was love at first sight. It was his first day of kindergarten. He was playing in the playground when he heard crying he went to go check it out and saw two boys picking on a girl. He scared them and they went running. He went over to the girl and as soon as he looked in her big beautiful blue eyes he fell in love. Since then they have always been together. They got married when they turned 18 even though their parents were against it. With their second baby on the way
+ other: He loves playing the piano. Has been playing since he could walk
+ model: Ian Somerhalder

Comment and I'll start :)

Comment and I'll start :)